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highway5 wael tarek Getting acquainted
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hi there, m new to this site
anyway i just wanted to listen some feedback on my 2nd tune ever which i believe is very good for me at this stage . . .
so tell me the pros cons and the overall impression okay. thanx in advance
the track's name is "highway5 - back then"
www.mp3.com/highway5
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2003 2:54 pm |
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PeterB
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The part to the break....It can be beter, doesn't like that sort of bass line what you use much.
I love the drums in the break
The melody from the break is great.
A good follow-up melody
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2003 6:59 pm |
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highway5 wael tarek Getting acquainted
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thnx alot peterB. . . looks like not alot of ppl answer the forums around here
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You usually get more response if you provide a direct download link
ppl are lazy you know....hehe
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2003 4:57 pm |
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highway5 wael tarek Getting acquainted
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hehe man, all they have to do is open the site , click download on the track nothing special u know . . . but same here i as lazy tooo hehe
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2003 12:14 pm |
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we're all lazy i guess....but i had a listen to your tracks now
both of them are ok...but needs some improvement to sound professional i think...
i liked Words better than Back Then....it simply got a better melody according to my ears
keep on producing...maybe you can try making new versions of your tracks? keeping the best parts and improving the rest
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2003 4:11 pm |
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highway5 wael tarek Getting acquainted
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okay . . i was thinking of makin a remix of both of them . . or should i call it a remake?? but doesn't "back then" sounds more proffesional??
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2003 10:27 am |
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Viceroy Sam Club Franchise Owner
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OK, here's my opinion. Keep in mind that I do not DJ or produce.
I think that both of them do need some improvement to sound professional.
I liked Words better than Back Then. Actually, I thought that Words sounded more professional. I didn't really like the bass you started with on Words- not very crisp or professional.
I liked the melody on words better than Back Then. I really liked the intro in Words- that fading into the melody was done very neatly, sounds great. I think I would put in a different kind of bass or something instead of the artificial hand-clap sound on Words. The melody is great- I especially liked the new sound introduced about 3:00 in. Though maybe it would be better to use a more varied melody- you use the same basic one with little variation which makes the tune a little boring by the end. And I think heavier bass through the entire track would have helped.
Well, that's my unprofessional opinion. I hope it helps.
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