Hi check mine tune out please

Massive · **Posted:** Tue Jul 01, 2003 7:16 pm

been working with fruityloops for 2 months and this is mine first production you mite hear some errors but to be a pro you got to be an ametuer Razz

http://www.clanwiet.com/downloads/Massive.zip

Viceroy · **Posted:** Wed Jul 02, 2003 4:44 pm

Not bad. I like the melody, but the same one is repeated over and over near the end of the track. Small variations in the melody, for example bringing it down on octave or simply progressing the melody a bit would work better, in my opinion. Also, a longer period of the melody would be nicer, if it was variated. Most of the song is the pre-melody build up, but you could cut some of that out for the rest of the track.
My opinion, of course.

Massive · **Posted:** Thu Jul 03, 2003 12:50 pm