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fuser

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Hey there!

I have produced this piece a while ago but still not finished (you will see that!). I am open for any suggestions and comments so I will know whether I am on the right track. Thanks!

Link: http://www.mitsuclub.net/fuser/sample1.m3u
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Smike

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Some cool ideas there m8...Althought i havenīt listened the whole track a couple ogf things come to my mind...

Love the way the track starts, i would delay the bass a bit...at min 1:15/1:30 or so...

Well done with fx, use them more...i mean, do the arrangement a bit more proggy, pull out some of the synth lines you have there(at the intro) and let the fx and the pad do the work..

Last, on the brake...you start with a synth with delay and then some chords will follow...iīll lose them(the chords,not right for ma TASTE) and iīd work a bit on the first melo...

Just an opinion m8...tried to be as constructive as i could...itīs all there...Wink

Best regards, Smike
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This is a brilliant track. Very well produced, clean sound. Nice melody, effects, and mood. Keep it up! This sounds very much like a professional track you would hear on a mix CD.
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Thanks Viceroy, thanks Smike. Smile This is my second production to date.
I am now working on the main melody (as I said before, it is still unifinished) and i am sure the main melody is a hell of a melody indeed. I will keep you posted with the latest samples.
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Sweet song bro.
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DaveJeff:

I could use some of your (more elaborate) comments. Thanks however for the positive feedback! Smile
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TO tell the truth, this could probably be s tune by itself; but do keep us posted when you put the melody in, I'd like to here that.
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Viceroy,

actually i think you are right, if you really believe that the version you heard there can be sent to a label, I might as well do so. In this case I will have 2 different mixes of the track to send to the labels, which will be better.....what do you think? Can you imagine the first version (the sample online) on a vinyl release? Razz
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It reminds me very much of some stuff on Armin's ASOT label. But as I said, I'd like to hear with the melody as well, as I personally am more interested in melodic trance.
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