My first song - Need Feedback

DJ_Zirkonium · **Posted:** Thu Mar 13, 2003 9:29 pm

Hello, I'm a new artist on mp3.com

post your comments on the song I have made, thanks!

Synbox - Entrée en Trance

www.mp3.com/synbox

-zirk

DJ_Zirkonium · **Posted:** Sun Mar 23, 2003 6:13 am

My second track is available on my page.

the title is: Synbox - Space War

-zirk

mommozz · **Posted:** Sun Mar 23, 2003 8:54 am

i would say entree en trance is better than space wars. But, ur entree en trance is not bad. u just might need fixes at the 1:24... its kinda stiff over there. prehaps u should add a crash or any other things to change it and at 2:06 also lil stiff. should add snare roll. bass line should be louder. Hats should be more open. kick should be more heavy. song structure is very consistant, should be different especially the 3 quarter the the end.

look here, i am not becoming a smarty-pants here. just wanna give opinion in making ur songs better...

but this is ur first songs, its considered very good... well done. Good luck!

i give it a 6/10 since this is ur 1st song

PeterB · **Posted:** Tue Apr 01, 2003 3:36 pm

For me its sounds a bit as an old commodore 64 track for a game, ou know...

But a very nice commodore 64 track then Smile