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TranceAddict14 Bryant Weekend ClubberVibes: 11.60 Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Member #: 5,520 Posts: 51 Location: Delaware
Post subject: Sunset Star
Hi all i made a new track and i would like some opinions from you people.
good and bad comments are welcomed! Final Call-Sunset Star
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/finalcallmusic.htm (oh yea the link acts stupid sometimes...so if it doesnt work for you...then it'll probly work later)
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 9:00 pm
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Sunset Star -
First thing, turn down the volume of the clap sound or get another that is as strung out. It gets kind of annoying. Turn up the synth a bit. Maybe fade in the snare (which was a cool snare). I liked the choir sound. It was very soothing. Its just me, but lose the vovals in the beginning I really liked the song even with those small flaws.
Ferry Corsten - Punk (Final Call's Drop it hard Mix)
Maybe get a lower synth sound for the beggining. The maing meoldy seemed a bit off for some odd reason and turn it up. the drum and bass beat was a bit out of whack. The remix was quality none the less. Good job.
You and Me (dub Mix) -
In the beggining, turn down the distant kick. Once again turn up the main melody and turn down the beat, both were very cool sounding. And turndown the snare, which i noticed you used in Sunset Star. Result: Awesome songs but they need some work.
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 5:36 pm
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Steven H The Earthquaker Club Franchise OwnerVibes: 157.49 Joined: 29 Jul 2001 Member #: 9 Posts: 2363
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good feedback Stridr13 keep it up
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 6:45 pm
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TranceAddict14 Bryant Weekend ClubberVibes: 11.60 Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Member #: 5,520 Posts: 51 Location: Delaware
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Thanks on the reply man...im tryin to fix everything up at the moment anyway...
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 7:06 pm
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Now that I reviewed your tracks...review mine. I use the same website. And another called internet DJ but I only have one on there.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/audiotripmusic.htm
Oh, dont check out Raving Psycho. That one need a lot of work.
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 7:58 pm
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TranceAddict14 Bryant Weekend ClubberVibes: 11.60 Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Member #: 5,520 Posts: 51 Location: Delaware
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Im listenin to last laugh now....the laughing is kinda freaky...it sounds pretty psy-trance....(which i aint into) but the transitions are pretty kool.i lke the sound effect sound at like 1:35. its a pretty good all around decent track..something i would throw out at a rave.Try doing some uplifting and get back to me
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 9:02 pm
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Did you check out Requiem and Cecilia (Rip Tide 2)?
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 9:22 pm
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