New tune Digital Illusions

DJLifeAndDeath · **Posted:** Mon Jan 31, 2005 7:34 pm

Hi Eric,

Mate, you've got some corking ideas there!! The sound is lovely towards the break.
But it's not quite right on the build up. Some of the key changes sound a little forced, the hit hats are a little to pronounced and the leading in sequence to thin!!

With that said, you'll probably sort them in the polishing and mastering. But for sound and effort, that's a thumbs up. Plus it can only get better matey!! Very Happy

Well done!!! It's better than me!! hehe

scarletibis · **Posted:** Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:56 am

Hi there,

Thank you for your constructive comments. Appreciated.
Goold help.

Cheers

Viceroy · **Posted:** Wed Feb 02, 2005 3:09 am

I agree with Alan. I like the first half of the track, the built up is nice and fairly professional. But once the actual melody breaks in, it wasn't too exciting because there wasn't anything new that hadn't basically already been heard before the break. So I think you need a new sound, a new synth, or a slightly different melody to keep interest throughout.
As well, the hi-hats aren't very good. Very artificial and "cheap" sounding I think, particularly about half-way through towards the break where they are used more extensively when the melody drops. Maybe some harder percussion is needed here.

scarletibis · **Posted:** Wed Feb 02, 2005 8:13 am

Hi Viceroy

Thank you for your post. I see what you mean . All noted

Thanx again cheers

DaveJeff · **Posted:** Tue Feb 08, 2005 7:38 am

Nice work! I think I heard the edited piece.