Hard Tech Trance...."Cerebral Surroundings"!

[The Brethren]

Hi,
Me and a friend produce music under the artist name "The Brethren" and we have one release out as it stands.

We would be very greatful if you could give us some feedback on these tracks (link below).....most importantly the track named "Cerebral Surroundings" as this will be on our second release!

We have had alot of bad feedback which is fine but im not sure if i could call it professional feedback...maybe we will get a better reply from you guys?

Thanks,
The Brethren.

http://www.internetdj.com/artists.php?op=show&id=32577&genre=54

[Smike]

Hey,

I´ve listened the track...1st of all i have to say that i´m not really on this style...

The sound is good enought but, there´s so much stuff/ideas on there....then the arrangement get too long for MY taste.

I´d concentrate on 1 or 2 things you have(the ones you like best)and build the track around them...hope you don´t get it hard...