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Van Ferier
Ron Tal Ferier
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Vibes: 1.08

Joined: 22 Feb 2005
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Location: Israel

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hello everybody im new here on ivibes...i produce mostly uplifting & progressive trance, but other styles as well..i am 18 years old from israel..
have a listen to a new track that im working on..and i will be happy to hear some diffrent opinions Smile

here's the link for the mp3 stream:
http://www.o-zen.com/art/play.php?band_id=219&song_id=1399&mode=song_hifi

Cool

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Dreej
André Vermeij
i:Vibes Crew

Vibes: 96.65

Joined: 25 Dec 2003
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Location: Tilburg, Netherlands

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Hi man, welcome! Smile

Listening to your track now... The overall production sounds very smooth! The percussion sounds quite standard and perhaps a bit thin, as well as the bassline. Perhaps give it a little more spice Smile. The melodies in the build are quite okay; nothing too memorable, but nice nonetheless. The breakdown is really cool! I really like the way in which the 'longer' synth plays its melody accompanied by the other, less hearable melodies.

All in all quite nice! The overall vibe leans a bit to the more commercial side of trance, but that's nothing we can't handle.

Keep it up!
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Sam
Club Franchise Owner

Vibes: 230.33

Joined: 28 Jan 2003
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Location: Canada

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OK, I'm listening to it now.
Kudos on the direct link too, makes it more convient.
Good start to the track. I have to agree with Dreej about the baseline tho, you might want to alter it to spice things out.
The melody is pretty good, but again not something hugely creative. Sounds like an ASOT record - okay production, but I think you need something new to distunguish yourself from the other artists around. As a side note, the new melody coming in at about 2:40 is very nice, and I think the best part of the track overall. Like the delayed phase-out of the synths in that part too, sounds pretty cool.

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Valery Nightingale
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i like this tunes Cool Cool
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DaveJeff

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It's very good man. It's a relief because I'm starting to hear more and more of the same crap I don't hear tracks like this often.
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